This week’s photo provided by Jade Wong.
Another foray into the attempt at haiku. Or, just a three-line poem if that doesn’t work!
Smuggled among glitter
grass, topsy-turvy puzzle.
A paper white bat.
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I’m no haiku expert (or amateur even) but seemed like a good attempt to me and summed up my initial response to the prompt too! I like the bat image. Nicely done.
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Thanks. I’m glad to know it made sense at least.
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I am not a Haiku expert either, or even close, but I really like this short poem (Haiku).
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Thanks. I appreciate the visit.
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Haiku’s are difficult, I enjoyed the images you gave me. I might have left out the word grass.
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Yes they are and you’d think they wouldn’t be. Thanks for the suggestion. I’ll go back and check it out.
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I see what you mean about the word grass. Not sure how I’d replace the word to keep the syllables right. I’ll have to work on it. Thanks.
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Lovely images and well done…
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Thanks
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A complete story in 10 words. Great take.
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Thank you so much.
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I think that attempt worked quite well. Super creative going the haiku route 😀
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Thanks so much.
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Lovely haiku! I love the image of the bat. 🙂
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Thank you so much.
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