FFfAW Challenge – Week 12-06 through 12-12-2016

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This week’s photo provided by Jade Wong.

Another foray into the attempt at haiku. Or, just a three-line poem if that doesn’t work!

Smuggled among glitter

grass, topsy-turvy puzzle.

A paper white bat.

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14 thoughts on “FFfAW Challenge – Week 12-06 through 12-12-2016”

I’m no haiku expert (or amateur even) but seemed like a good attempt to me and summed up my initial response to the prompt too! I like the bat image. Nicely done.

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athling2001 | December 15, 2016 at 8:34 pm

Thanks. I’m glad to know it made sense at least.

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I am not a Haiku expert either, or even close, but I really like this short poem (Haiku).

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athling2001 | December 15, 2016 at 8:34 pm

Thanks. I appreciate the visit.

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Haiku’s are difficult, I enjoyed the images you gave me. I might have left out the word grass.

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athling2001 | December 15, 2016 at 8:36 pm

Yes they are and you’d think they wouldn’t be. Thanks for the suggestion. I’ll go back and check it out.

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- athling2001 | December 15, 2016 at 8:41 pm
  
  I see what you mean about the word grass. Not sure how I’d replace the word to keep the syllables right. I’ll have to work on it. Thanks.
  
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