This week’s photo prompt is provided by Maria with Doodles and Scribbles.
Guide for Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers
1. A prompt photo will be provided each Tuesday to be used as a base to your story. Please include photo prompt with your story.
2. Linking for this challenge begins on Tuesday and runs to the following Monday evening.
3. Please credit photo to photographer.
4. The story word limit is 100 – 150 words (+ – 25 words). Please try and stay within this limit.
The dark came suddenly, shutting off the street from view until a lone street light sputtered to life. A light snapped on inside one of the houses and he watched a shadow cross behind the curtains.
Was it her? He wasn’t sure, chewed his lower lip in frustration. Should he knock on the door? Call? Sit impotent in the car? How was that different than what he’d done the last five years?
Would he do this for five more years? Could he?
As always, he hated himself, his indecision. Hated his tiny, dark, apartment. His crappy meals. The dust. Dark. Cold.
She would make all things better. Hot chocolate on cold evenings, snuggling in front of the fire. Feeding each other bites at restaurants. Dancing in the living room. Making love in the soft warmth of her bed. Their bed.
If only he knew her name…..
There’s always something painful about the loneliness and indecision of making any decision that could change our lives…most engaging story….
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Thanks.
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“If only he knew her name…..”
That would be a great ‘first step’… 😉
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It would help!
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Excellent write. Can’t decide if I should have sympathy for his lonely, sad life, or be afraid that he is a bit of a stalker and it might all end badly…
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I’d be afraid…. very afraid. Thanks for coming by.
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This story gave me goosebumps! Very chilling story about a stalker. Well done!
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Many thanks. I appreciate the read and the visit.
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My pleasure!
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That last line, wow! I love how vague this story was, so I wasn’t sure whether to feel sorry for the main character or to be wary of his intentions. I especially liked the flow and feel of the story matches the photo perfectly 🙂
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Thank you so much.
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He sounds to be a loner, about to loss control. Great story.
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I’d agree. Thanks for coming by.
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ohh.. spooky! That last line made it all! Awesome story for the image… 🙂
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Thanks.
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The last line made me shudder. Creepy!
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Grin!
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