The challenge for Flash Fiction for the Purposeful Practitioner will open early Wednesday morning, April 5th. Allow the prompt to take you anywhere you want to go! (Limit your stories to 200 words.)
This challenge is open until 11:00 pm Friday night, April 14th, 2017.
Flash Fiction for the Practical Practitioner
I never understood anything about walls and fences, not til I saw the boy. He was young, ten maybe, hands holding tight to the barbed wire. Eyes looking like they’d seen the world and beyond.
I wanted to talk to him, find out his name, why he was behind the wire. I’d been told the walls were to keep the monsters out, but the boy didn’t look like any monster I’d ever imagined. He didn’t have monster eyes.
His eyes had no hope. That’s the closest I can come to describing them.
I went to Daton. He’s the Wise One. He knows everything.
“Whys that boy behind the wall?” I asked him.
“He’s a monster.”
“He doesn’t look like a monster.”
“Monsters don’t always take the shape you might imagine.”
And so I went to the wall every day. Watched him. Waited for him to turn into a monster.
And, you know, he never did.
And you know what, he never did….love the ending! Great take!
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So true. Thanks.
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I’ve got one word for this- Excellent! I felt the confusion of the narrator child.
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Thank you. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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That last line is very powerful. Great story.
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Thanks so much.
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The opening paragraph was so strong. Well done. Thanks for participating this week.
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Thanks and you are so welcome. I enjoy the challenge.
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