Response – JSW Challange 2-20-2024

The JSW Challenge is open to anybody who wishes to participate. Using the writing prompt, write a flash fiction no longer than 300 words and post it to your page. The Challenge starts on Monday and runs through Sunday each week. Please remember to link your story back to this post so everyone can read your entry.

“Isn’t he cute?”

“Who?”

“Jason.”

“I’m worried about you.”

“Why?”

“He’s a psychopath.”

“But he’s a cute psychopath.”

“Those words don’t even go together.”

“Of course they do.”

“You can’t go out with him.”

“Oh, if only he’d ask me!”

“Be glad he hasn’t.”

“I’m not. I wish he would ask me. I’d say yes in a heartbeat.”

“But he’s a psychopath.”

“A cute psychopath!”

“You’ve really got to get over that.”

“You’re just jealous because I said he was cute first.”

“Not in a million years.”

“Oh, he’s coming this way.”

“Don’t go out with him.”

“Don’t be jealous.”

“I’m not. Please don’t go out with him.”

“He’s looking at me.”

“Don’t do it.”

“Hello, Jason.”

Response – JSW Challange 2-20-2024

The JSW Challenge is open to anybody who wishes to participate. Using the writing prompt, write a flash fiction no longer than 300 words and post it to your page. The Challenge starts on Monday and runs through Sunday each week. Please remember to link your story back to this post so everyone can read your entry.

He stood at the window looking out at the empty patio. Everything looked good but what difference did that make if there was no one to come over and sit outside? Used to be there were birthday parties for the kids and cookouts with the guys but none of that was anymore. The kids were grown and gone and the guys led other lives. And he and his wife were divorced some twelve years now. So why had he fixed up the patio?

Truth was he missed the birthday parties and the cookouts but you couldn’t go back. Science had yet to make time flow backwards. And, besides, why would he want to give up the peace which had come with the divorce?

Moving away from the window, he started fixing dinner for one, his usual fare. A sandwich and some chips. Took it outside and sat in one of the chairs. At least he could enjoy the patio!

Friday Fictioneers 2-29-2024

PHOTO PROMPT © Fleur Lind

It’s the little things, he thought, that made the difference in the end: the rubber duckie, the resin koala, the woman gathering flowers. Funny how the big things didn’t matter. He packed them away one by one, each little thing, knowing he would keep them forever.

The funeral was on a Thursday. Light rain. Warm skies, just the kind of day she’d loved.

After the funeral, he went home and put the box away in the attic. Thirty years later, he’d find the box and sort through it, remembering the moment as if it had just been yesterday.

Retro Tuesday 2-27-2024

Daily Post Prompt – Not Lemonade

When life gives you lemons… make something else. Tell us about a time you used an object or resolved a tricky situation in an unorthodox way.

Not quite what I ended up with, but I go where the character goes:)

Not Lemonade

The ground was cold beneath his body, a remembrance of better times when the people he had known used to walk this street to and from the market or church. Visiting friends and family on Sunday afternoons. Lemonade on the front porch. Chocolate cake. The two together always made a funny taste in his mouth. He tasted it even today, years after the last glass passed his lips.

Today wasn’t then. It never was and never would be. Then was gone, leaving nothing but cold ground and him. He coughed. Shivered. Mist traced the contours of the ground, wafting over him and beyond, swallowing him in whiteness. He knew it would go. Things always did. And he was patient. He had nothing else to do, nothing waiting. No one waiting.

He’d been twenty when he signed up. Twenty and gun-ho and dreaming of glory. He’d been what he now called stupid twenty. He was twenty six now, maybe less stupid; definitely less gun-ho. The years in-between were nothing but a blur, memory covered in the same mist which now covered him. Then it had been gun smoke, lying so heavy on the battlefield the wounded and the dead had disappeared. The only way he’d known they were underfoot was when he stepped on one during an advance.

But he didn’t want to think about the war now. He only wanted to think about the house just a little way down the road. The house he loved. The house where he’d grown from a baby to a man. Sometimes he wondered if he hadn’t been happier and smarter when he was still in diapers. At least he’d been loved. It was love which had drawn him back, pulling him effortlessly home. The fancy gowns sweeping around the ballroom, candles sparkling like stars. The mud hole where he and Rand’s boy would sit for hours, watching tadpoles being born. Black and white both seeing the beginning of life together. He’d wanted it to end that way someday.

The sound of footsteps pulled him from his thoughts. A moment later Rand’s boy peered down at him but he wasn’t a boy any longer. Just like he wasn’t a boy. They were both men, both grown, both lost in an alien world.

Rand’s boy hunkered down beside him. “Looks like you in some trouble now,” he said softly, face creased with care.

“Yeah,” he managed. “Hurts like the dickens.”

“But you came home.”

Their eyes met. “I did,” he said, voice almost silent. “I wanted to see them tadpoles again.  Catch’em when they grew.”

Rand’s boy laughed, a big world-encompassing laugh. “We did do that, didn’t we? Had us some good frog’s legs.”

“Frog’s legs,” he repeated. “Wanted to come home.”

He felt a hand on his shoulder. “You home now. You home now.”

The doctor straightened, wiping sweat from this forehead with the back on one hand. He’d been at this long enough to know when to move on. Outside the sound of cannons and gunshot echoed through the air, sounds that never seemed to go silent.  He could smell the cordite in the air, was standing in ankle deep mud and blood.

He nodded at the nurse.  She pulled the sheet up over the soldier’s face as they moved on to the next.

JSW Challange 2-20-2024

The JSW Challenge is open to anybody who wishes to participate. Using the writing prompt, write a flash fiction no longer than 300 words and post it to your page. The Challenge starts on Monday and runs through Sunday each week. Please remember to link your story back to this post so everyone can read your entry.